Please don’t write like this.

Things happen. Then there are results. The word that should be used in the last sentence of this awful copy is “happens”
As it stands, this is simply barbarous.

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One Response to Please don’t write like this.
  1. Jennifer
    August 17, 2010 | 12:46 am

    I’m pretty sure the word “results,” used as a verb, appears on this site: http://unsuck-it.com/

    Also, and I’m guessing here, “impacts.” *shudder*

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